What do you think makes a good friend? Give 3 reasons to support your answer as well as specific details.

Humans are called social animals. Therefore making a friend is one of important things in our life. In this short essay, I will discuss what I think make a good friend. 1. Chemistry One of important factors to make a good friend is to choose a good chemistry person. If we have a good chemistry, we won’t feel so much pressure to meet and talk to them. 2. Encounter Even though we have a good chemistry, we cannot make a friend without encountering, so to meet people in a right time in a right place is also an important factor to make a friend. 3. Frequency Although we have a good chemistry and meeting in a right time, if we cannot meet so frequently, it is a bit difficult to continue the relationship. Therefore, frequent meeting and talking is also important factor to make a good friend. In this essay, I discussed what I make a good friend in three issues: chemistry, encounter and frequency. Nowadays, thanks to the internet, even if we live different place or country, we can keep in touch somewhat easier than ever. If you found a good friend, please value your relationship with them because it is said that having a good friend is a fortune of our life.

 

 

 

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What do you think makes a good friend? Give 3 reasons to support your answer as well as specific details.

   

Humans are called social animals. Therefore, making a friend is one of the most important things in our life. In this short essay, I will discuss what I think makes a good friend. the three qualities that are most important in a friend: chemistry, encounters, and frequency.

To begin with, one of the most important factors to making a good friend is to choose  a person with whom you share/have chemistry. If we have  good chemistry, we  won’t feel so much pressure to meet and talk to them.

2.    Encounter

Secondly,     Even though we have good chemistry, we cannot make a friend without encountering, so to meet people at the right time at the right place is also an important factor to making a friend.

3.    Frequency

   Although we have good chemistry and we are meeting, if we cannot meet so frequently, it is a bit difficult to continue the relationship. Therefore, frequent meeting and talking is also an important factor in making a good friend.

   In this essay, I discussed what I think makes a good friend in three issues: chemistry, encounter and frequency. Nowadays, thanks to the internet, even if we live in a different place or country, we can keep in touch somewhat easier than ever. If you have found a good friend, please value your relationship with them because it is said that having a good friend is one good fortune of our life.   

 

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